Comments on Gratuitous Literary Fragment #159 (eve of battle)

Gro-Tsen-fan (2018-03-21T10:33:57Z)

C'est brillant : je n'arrive pas à savoir si c'est la description très humaine d'un moment sincèrement touchant, ou si c'est de l'homoérotisme à deux balles, voire carrément la scène d'intro d'un porno gay. Et je suppose que c'est fait exprès ! La tournure complètement ampoulée « he harked to Gale's pellucid voice », le cliché « firmness of his muscular chest », le vocabulaire shakespearien « moiety », la référence au bataillon sacré de Thèbes… tu as dû bien t'amuser.

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